IP:
The guy that asked for my age....Im 13 years old
Thanx for all of your feedback.......And the last 2 lines....Im gonna be honest.....I scrolled that shit down just to get it finished quickly...lol...swear...What Im gonna do now is start over again and begin with those 2 lines.....But I would still appreciate feedback on this piece....my next verse will be better......
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