You told us quality wasn't that good to begin with - so I won't tell you anything you don't already know. The beat could be turned up a notch or two in volume, it was really tough to hear it.

Cam - Lyrics were nice, as expected. Like I told you on AIM, only thing I really see wrong is breath control and quality. Flow was alright, better than I expected for your first audio. Nice verse. .

Dez - Voice is mad deep, and was hard to tell what you were saying in some spots, try standing a little farther away from the mic when you spit, it will eliminate some of those pops. Lyrics were good, flow was ok. . Sounds like you're reading straight off the paper. . Just up your quality some, and try to show some more emotion.

Overall, this was a good listen for your first audio, guys. Keep at it, and keep droppin`.