Banned for being stupid
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IP:
aight dude, i thought the post was aight. the vocab was pretty simple, the wordplay could be elevated, but it was ok. the content and topic were pretty good, the structure was good, the flow was on target for most of it, and i thought ur best lines were the first ones. good job, and ill be waitin for ur next peice, good luck.
peace.....
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