First off, I'd like to say, I love listening to British hip hop. With that out of the way, Quality is a your biggest problem. The shitty mics is definitely a big part of it.
Cam-I hate you and your dope lyrics. Your flow was pretty on point, and your accent makes me cream. I could pinpoint the exact second when you stopped recording, cuz there was a lot of background noise in your part. All you need is a better mic and better editing.
Bax-Your content was dope, but you sounded like a deadpan comic. There was no emotion, and it didn't seem like you were flowing with the beat. Try to learn your lyrics before you record, so you're not reading right off the page, makes it sound better.
pretty good overall, better than my first audio for sure. probably better than my new audio
Peace