every one was right, this shit was boring the whole way through, nothin stuck out to me at all, the best line in here had to be

Cut your throat wit "graphite", no traces of what "lead to your death"//
Im leavin you "short ranged" like fat girls singin in choir, all out of breath//

and thats even mediocore 'or however u spell it'

but i'll give it mk, his verse flowed better, nothin was great though