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Old 09-27-03, 05:11 PM   #8
MyNd. FuLL
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good battle guys heres my breakdown

wordplay=drama, he had better wordplay throughout his verse, expected more from dark for some reason

flow=drama, even tho it was a litte choppy and fell off at times, he still had better flow than dark

vocab=neither, no outstanding vocab in this one, but its not always necessary

structure=darkforce, the only reason he wins this one is becuz "drama's~verse~looked~liked~this" its not necessary, anybody wit sense can see your multis, no need for the (~~~~)
it is very newbish

multis=drama,nice multis in your verse, i didn't see any from dark, not saying you need them but it helps wit complexity and wordplay

creativity=drama, he verse was more creative, dark your verse seemed a little elementary in some areas
example "but I give ya props for not bein a coward, watchin me while I fucked ya moms in tha shower/"
just a little basic to me, therefore drama gets this one too

complexity=drama, nothing too complex but, dark put up a weak verse compared to drama as far as complexity

punches=drama, obviously drama takes this one wit some good punches, dark threw a few but didn't hit hard as drama

favorite line=drama
"As far~as~it~goes your audio aint audible, appluadable?//
Sound like a probable PATIENT FOR LIFE SUPPORT in da hospital//
nice punch, nothin fancy but i liked it

poll vote=C_Drama,obvioulsy drama took this wit a better everything, decent verse by darkforce seems like u haven't battled in a while, its cool though just keep spitten
good luck to both and please sont bitch about my breakdown, its my honest opinion

and to the voters, no using my quote as a vote, use your own breakdown, thankyou


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