Banned for being stupid
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aight yall i thought this post was hella tight. Let me start wit Dez first. i was feelin the vocab and wordplay the most in here. ur structure was good, and the flow was still on target. my favorite lines were
"even if we win, we lose.. some people will always consider you a fluke
'Give credit where credit due'.. fuck that, instead lets put Monica Lewinsky on the news
yeah its true.. the only person you can truly count on is yourself
everyone is Two-Faced..they just only reveal one to everyone else
^^i thought that was an awesome ending.
Onto to Pot1ent verse. i thought the wordplay and the way u flowed it together (u know what i mean?) was the best. my favorite lines were
"I know i got two eyes but it surely not to see who's disguised
Centre of Two-Facing bring divides from all peeps who contrive
^^i was feelin that as a good way to start the verse
Aight now to the last, but not the least verse. I thought steeze switch did a great job wit vocab and flow. i thought the wordplay was there but the vocab and flow were the highlight of this verse, my favorite lines were
"They two-faced unable to relate as one and to face
The truth...To have twice as much use to their fate
But it only complicates their stakes to dodge death
Two-face people are those that hold grudges best
^^i found that extremely interesting
overall good post, id probably rate it a 8.5-9/10. great job yall, i cant wait to read more open mics from u guys.
peace.....
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