^^^werd. u tryed ur best, so keep at it, and ull elevate, but it aint my job to tell u how good u could get, so ima tell u what i thought of the post. it was pretty basic, the vocab and wordplay especially. try addin multis and metas in ur shit next time, but that was ok for ur first. just keep workin at it and ull improve ur skills. good luck man.

peace.....