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i thought this was a good piece..i think you could have came better though from wut i have read in the past..your flow was good punchlines were good, but i liked the wordplay, an structure....i aint involved wit this beef but i think it was a good piece of writting...an can you check the roa..west told me to come try out so i sent something i wrote awhile ago to you'z in the forum for a try out thread an i was wondering if you could see if im in or not..thanks man peace
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