i liked the idea and originality but i jus wasnt feeling tha flow...........everythin else was fine but i wasnt on beat or feeling this.......ya said it yaself that this is ya only 2nd topical.......but its obvious ya soon to elevate in this category....all i say is jus keep keying verses and elevate.........this was deep shit tho......i liked this

School starts and tells us to strive for individuality...
But yet tells us to conform... I cant stand this duality...

this was such a hot line coz wen i look bk on school i think, damn i was a bit of a prik to some p[eeps.........jus to conform.....anyways soz for babbling blood......peace