ohhhh shit good pieces by both. I liked ill-mentals piece but i was a little too simple for me and fell off at the end. But good flow and everything. Not puttin your piece down at all.
Chrit had a beautiful piece. Even though we kinda beefin right now props go where props go. I really felt it. 1-10, i give it a 7.5 n that's good for bein new to topicals. In contrary to Ills verse yours got better as it went on. From this point on it was really good.
Quote:
Taught to follow rules.. yet we must think outside the box...
Formulas to adhere to yet preaching original thoughts...
School prepares us for real life... Is this how things must be...
A society that tells us what to do... how to think and what to be?...
I guess ignorance is bliss... I hope to be blind to reality...
Freedom a fantasy... Being able to speak ya mind... a fallacy...
You must work to support yourself... Another role to play....
Wondering when I'll choose my own path... could it be today?...
Retirement comes anticipated... shutter to think I truly hate it...
So stuck in a rut... that I now miss this game and how I've played it...
Deaths around the corner... not afraid I"m truly stunned...
Realization that REAL life... only exists "on the horizon"
|
thats great stuff
vote - chrit