pretty good stuff homie


'I guess ignorance is bliss... I hope to be blind to reality...
Freedom a fantasy... Being able to speak ya mind... a fallacy
^stood out...

ur flow was pretty sound to me when i read it..maybe it depends on the reader
anyway the basic concept was good...just need to iclude some more imagery within the verse...vicab was slightly better than usual too
overall i see an improvement

what?


stfu^...an improvement