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Old 09-28-03, 10:12 AM   #6
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Aight listening and typing..

billy - Damn really nice beat, works good for your voice and flow..
using lines from the past like bill and teds phone booth.. nice..
not one space like your name, good specific..
make you eat your words to show you how shit tastes.. haha
Your quality sounded really nice, i think you fell off the flow once and a while but who cares, a nice overall verse.. i realized that you stopped spittin before the 2 minute mark, but next time you should cut the beat off because i thought initially you were gunna murder the time limit...

TWT - Ok this is a nice beat, but its comepletely drowning out your voice, combined with the fact that from what i can hear it sounds like your words are merging together making it harder to understand, honestly i cant hear half of your lines..
"i spray vets blah balh balhb labhalbhalbhab lbhalb september 11th" i couldnt understand a word you said in that..
youre line about unsafe sex was pretty played.. thats one that i heard.
after september 11th line, still having trouble understanding, heard soimething about cut like attempts at suicide, alright..
your half assed like excess skin after extensive weight loss..? i dunno what the skin has to do with anything..
The luetenant dan line was pretty decent.
Alright after your little pause i thought things were getting better, but you had a lot of nice setups that i thought you were gunna flip into really nice completely lines, but you just left them hangin.. like the magic johnson sick of the game, you finished it off really weak by completing it with lines are simple and played.. decent multi but just didnt do the trick..
haha alright the last line about billy idol was tight, ir eally liked that, i wish the rest of your verse could have been like that cause you might have won.. but the first half of your verse really killed you, you could have saved yourself in the second by flipping some of those nice compairisons into sick lines, try to next time.

Vote - billy..

I think i explained my vote quite adaquately.. TWT honest i really didnt know what you were sayin for a while there, ive listened to all the verses dropped so far and yours is the only one i had trouble with, maybe it was the beat drowning your voice out, but i just think when you start goin really fast like that, you mold all your words together and its hard to pull them out.. just being honest with you, good battle tho, serious...
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