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Old 09-28-03, 11:53 AM   #2
rule
..Soft Focus..
 
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good piece...i thought you came harder in the 2nd half, the first half was good but i enjoyed the 2nd part better, good flow an wordplay though, vocab was decent..keep it up man uppen
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