^^^werd, but anywho i was really feelin that, like understatement said thought the lines were to long, which kinda messed up the flow, but besides that, the vocab was good, the metas and similies were off the hook, the content was kool, but yea im agree wit understatement again and say u should probably spit about a topic. but great job for a newbie, keep postin and elevatin cause i really enjoyed readin that.

peace.....