wow, i'm not going into that much detail ^^

i liked the structure, flowed nicely.. the vocab was obviously there.. an' i liked this bar "Slayin' the airwaves with raps
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Spittin' slick rhymes designed to quickly hit-ya" .... although quickly hit-ya is a really played rhyme...
overall it was good, especially for only your second open mic... but yo, peace

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