That was very deep and Beautiful


short downpour of emotion sport your goloshes to stay dry from my pain within~
and in my pain i sin i beg Moses to part the waters but day after day i swim~

I love this line. I may be reading to much into it but to me it seems as if your saying you want him to part the sea so you won't have to swim through it agian.
I really do love this piece at the end I had to say Damn aloud

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I live to die and
Destance my self to Feel
My life is an oxymoran
Like a suicide Pill