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Old 09-28-03, 07:17 PM   #12
DaGyrlRemarqabL
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"Trust is a fairy tale told to toddlers
By the givers of life who turn into midnight robbers "

Wow..Intense piece here, Chase...Vivid imagery added to the emotion in this, I've never really felt that suicidal before, But I certainly felt it thru you while reading this piece. It reaches out and grabs you, very powerful and captivating. Nice piece of writing.
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