Thread: Slow Dance
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Old 09-28-03, 07:37 PM   #15
varentao
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Twas like a gentle yet lightly substantial breeze. Lightly in the sense it isn't immediately heavy...

It was easy to get into. Easy to read all the way through.

Very nice piece. Executed quite superbly. Though the ending came good in the end, i felt it was a bit off (a bit, that's my critique!..heh..)..


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