well i typed up somethin nice for u guys but rb decided to fuck up and give me the page error bullshit. I'm not typin it again so basicly:

theres potential here. both of u need to take syn's advice. look through the audio help forum for tips on recording, editing, and mixing. cam, work on delivery alot. you have a decent flow and decent lyrics. Dez, dont just read. u need to rap the words lol. show emotion. its a song, not a poem. start practicing by mockin your favorite rappers. try to do what they do. then find your own style. With a few months of practice u should both be able to drop decent audios.

hats off to both for venturing away from text. welcome to audio

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