"this is how I always feel! So just let me fulfill! The dream, I keep havin every time I sleep/
the one where I can’t eat, I starve, cuz I’m put behind bars, left with my mind scarred/
that are 6 feet large, that I’m put 6 deep beneath ppl’s feet, left to rest in piece/
but I’m shocked locked, from this shot, got me rocked, cuz I just hot boxed/"---gene pool

^^^ really the only part of your rhyme i was really feelin. You had some nice word play and your content was pretty dope. Your imagry was tiight. pretty nice drop


"Everyday I think about ending-my-life, and im done pretending-to-fight, cause I had enough..
These thoughts on my mind, all the time, will it be a crime?, cause I know im not tough..
The days go long, and I feel all wrong, and everyday ending this life seems brighter..
Cause death is all I send, now I cant even defend, cause now im not a fighter.."---masta c

^^^ very nice...i was feelin these bars right here for sure. nice word play and your rhyme sceme was tiight...good drop


* All in all a very nice post yall.....was well worth a peep. Keep doing yall thing and keep elivate'n nah mean.....be easy,1

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" So for the 2nd time [The Pharisses] summoned the man who had been blind and said
"Speak the truth before God. We know this man is a sinner."
"Wether he is a sinner I do not know."
:The man replied:
"All I know is this...Once I was blind and now I can see"
John 1x 24-26