~LaDy DiViNiTy~
Mary~Jane Left A ‘PMS’ Stain , your raps~plain ash~grain and thats the "end of you", like i just wrote your last~name!!!// she 's gettin dragged~away like a bitch~chained to the frame of a car in the fast~lane//
~1~nice intro felt heat right in the beginnin and used good multies and punches

no~doubt you get "punched~out" like your leavin'~work//
believe~my~words, you'll be leavin~earth or sweeped off it like unneeded~dirt//
~2~damn that was a clever punch in the first line niceness in that and your multies flowed nicely which is a key in using them

Illiterate ~ Female~ Saying Unarticulate Crap Like 'Anorexia' is 'Phat'//
Im laying This Down Plain, U F*ckin’ 'Suck' and I aint Being 'Ironic' wit Dat//
~3~lol that was funny not really to extreme of a punch but got the job done nice

I CONTROL U like COMPOSERS, Put U Threw Pain By Pulling Out Your Nose-Hairs 4 Closure//
Bitch Is 'Taking pictures' of Her whack 'Rap' to get Her-Self some 'Exposure'//
~4~LMMFAO damn lol that was nice lol "jus to git sum expousure lol that was tight and still keeping the flow the whole peice good

Place A 'Ceramics' Ontop Of ur CRANIUM so you can say your 'Head-Strong'//
Ya never say things 'Right' strangle ya wit tha cord~ofa~mic now ya Definitely 'Dead-Wrong'//
~5~[/B]not bad ending nice peice had punches flowed nicely had everythin that is needed for a good battle verse and enjoyed reading it was simple and had the complexity nice job
id say a 9.5/10[/B]


mary jane

Anotha bitch gets swell~headed, `self~centered` now hell~headed
kinda lame entrance wasnt heated at all little multi like you werent experienced with them
my felt~presence belts~sentences, `housin` you like `rentin tenantsuh not that bad still not that heated for a battle but had good wordplay on this one`
you aint nice, I`m `so~tight`writin lyrics that can `(K)not tie`
constantly~winnin spittin words `gettin re(a)d more` than `stop lights`Stop lights? lol that was pretty decent i liked that in this battle kinda used lines like that but still decent
Lady~Divinity you started this shit, now im gon` finish
You couldn`t hang wit my `bars` if ya name was `Guiness`
thas like cockyness now your gitten angry in the verse it seems wich was a lil late but still wasnt that bad
I`ll `swallow` ya wackness, then `shit it out` to `pass tha truth`
you so ugly, playin `co-ed ball` is the only way `dudes make a pass~at~you!`DAMN! That was mean lol i loved that line lolthat hit hard got the job done correctly and flowed well
you just got fucked~up, someone tell her to stop~speakin
Cuz Divinity only `layin the law`, when fuckin `multiple policemen` this line and the one above were the hardest lines in this whole verse and they hit great they were extremely thought out well and used them the correct way in meaning of persoanls/punches flow was good but couldve been better i give this peice a 9.10
THIS WAS A GOOD BATTLE BUT I GOTTA GIVE IT TOO ~LaDy DiViNiTy~ ON THIS ONE SHE HAD THE BETTER OVERALL VERSE NO HATE JUS EXPLAINING IT THE WAY I SAW IT GOOD BATTLE TO BOTH EMCEES