damn definately feeling this peice, pretty sick and a good topic to flow off.
Quote:
The day's first light creeps through the window
Rays of sun soon outshine the candle's dim glow
Visions of gunfire expire I wake drenched in sweat
Hoping he doesn't see the fear when our eyes met
Shook off the premonition didn't heed the forewarning
Little did I know we'd share our last kiss that morning...
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opening verse was good, and was kinda interesting when it got to the premonition part. as always word-perfect killed it with the strong rhyme scheme. wanna collab Sally?