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Old 09-29-03, 10:32 AM   #10
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Yes, bribeone took this.
no, you aren't allowed to do one liner votes.
assholes. At least they're fatter than the votes in 13ths thread.

damn. Okay.
feeble- your verse was too bloody short. It had a lot of emotion, but sadly, it was played out emotion that we've all seen before. This was a good topic, should have looked into it deeper. Your flow was okay, but there was a very little wordplay. Try to elevate all of that.

bribe- very nicely done. your verse was full of excellant wordplay and a take on the topic that I didn't think of. Your flow was really good, and your interal rhymes were dope. you took this hands down.

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