dag yo.

Ill Mental-Your verse had really really good internals. Everything rhymed. It was a like a Beastie Boys verse. I loved it. Your content was only so/so. You had a couple good metaphors, and you definately looked deeply into the topic. Good work.

Chrit-improvement like whoa. You had a great scheme, great metas, this whole verse was off the hook.
shit the period ended.

vote-chrit.

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