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that was a good piece...i liked that wordplay and emotion, it wa great this line really caught my eye...
a tributary, rivulet, basic stream or sweeping canyon cutter
a detoxing, high achieving, selfish motherfucker
i thought that was great...good vocab as well..some i dont no the meaning but sounded cool lol...good piece amn shudnt be slept on once read keep it up
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