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to me this was one big metaphor....

gege i didnt particular care for this...........i dunno waht it was maybe the structure........maybe the word DOGGY.... i think perhaps puppy woulda been better...it jsut through a uneccasary CHILDISH vibe to it with the word doggy......... i mean damn this is hard to explain your overall topic and meaning was good but when i read it i got distracted from the true meaning of the peice

about learnign to love n trust again is something that i dont relate with teh word doggy....damn i cant explain myself

but gege you kno your work is good and i jsut wish i could explain what i mean

hazy