Hey Girl..
This was an amazing piece, Great imagery, and incredible transfer of emotions..very well written..At the beginning I thought he "left you" in a broke up with you kind of sense..I like how you didn't let the reader know he had died until the very end, cuz it makes it that much more impactful..seriously, I felt something wierd deep inside me when I read that last line.
Very Sad..I feel for you..I can only imagine what it would be like to lose someone like that.....
Be strong and keep on keepin' on, girl.
Beautiful poem.
Pz.