Its being heard in the street..by... Chaplin performers...Its torture
The forthcoming contorsion through Tycoons augmenting a fortune

N demik

the chaplin line really speaks out because he was a great performer of the arts
and poetry being an art you incorperated the two and i found that line irrestable


So Comprehend These Words I Send; Sit And Comprehend The Eternal Hope
And See Just How Far Your Friends Will Stray Because Of A Simple Joke
^ the double comprehend line (understatement) makes me feel that This was your highlight THIS IS WHAT you wanted us to understand and i felt it and got what you were saying


Everything Is Gone, Here Child, Become My Lament
You Spent Many A Year Telling Me To Get Bent
Hope Is No More, That's Right, No More Bliss
Yes, Come Closer, See How Sharp The Knife Is

^ understatment this was an excellint outro teh shorter italicied font made it stand apart from the rest and made the reader review your whole peice just to fully understand your poem

N demik with this line I COULDNT AGREE MORE:
There is a little tyrant inside of us all... trying to escape!!!!!!

this i belive is the main point of the topic
i felt that line right there was teh one the grabbed me and made me STAY on this page reading these poems and taking the 20 minutes it took me to decide who won

with that my vote goes to n demik because the topic was a hidden joy
and i feel that his poem hit home more and made me think of WHAT HIDDEN JOY do i obtain?