I can hardly see it through you guys eyes but for me it is really getting
ridiculous. But if i may say i would like to apologize for the whole ill-take-the-job-but-ill-post-
soon-crap that just happened. Merely shitty work just on my face for
awehile now and i havent really got the time to lay my hands on my keyboard
until now. So i guess you can consider my work ridiculous as hell too.
I know that many of you would say 'Damn, FInally!' and yet thats just exactly
what i had in mind. I may have not have the time but still i would do it.
TO start this i had to get in depth with the writers' perspectives on which
the topic occured through their minds and compressed them using their talents.
As ive seen here...the deepnesss exampled on each of the verses placed me in
such structure that would have possibly been a fantasy. Required much of their
inner meanings added to it.
So without further ado..here ya go.
N-Demik
..Far off from what ive seen from your works. I personally desired your whole
different approach on each of this and to be honest i am pretty much impressed
myself and this one is not an exception but the only i dont understand is
that why did you lost the eagernessof writing and The End had to get your ass
and participate on here?..(which is none of my business i supposed).
Youve introduced the whole piece with such quality and assessed it using such
powerful educational aspirations.
"Its being heard in the street..by... Chaplin performers...Its torture
The forthcoming contorsion through Tycoons augmenting a fortune"
I know i had to read between the lines here but it seems to me that the whole
Chaplin idea expressed inner desires in each of us. The true reflection of it
through a mirror as if you can refined and see it transparently. The soundless
of making your self heard highly shouted either pain or happiness.
"Even beyond the remorse reflected in the glass thats looking back
Missing the crooked back, but no giving back to the image looking back
But he isn't looking back...In fact thats the freeze frame forever seen
from your broken parents dream, as your grubby nails unpicked the seams"
Having these lines coming from such a great writer...brilliantly assembled
that they were firmly construed images that is basically refined the whole process
of giving them whole idea and story approached.
"The world stops to listen... but still nothing, I guess we were broken
Everything hidden is a puzzle, time devourers, I just don't have the ticks
Im only finding high spirits in liquor cabinets, I don't have the tocks either
I have the cider though, Im sure theres a hidden meaning in there somewhere."
...Even the finisher made it possible to understand the whole piece all throughout
The words and imagery compiled fromt op to bottom made it somehow to understand
each and every word of it. Hidden Desires waiting to shout itto the world but using
only actions sometimes its just impossible to do.
Brilliantly made.
Understatement
UNderestimation in my part was such a dissappointment because youve definitely
risked everything to obtain such a very inpirational piece on this one. Just
like the one on the last tourny where youves used your acoustic ability to had me
stumblin off the tourny.
Way to be on a different level of the topic.
Started looking at a certain list where you need to compare beginning to end.
Start to finish. First to last.
"Here We Are In The Beginning; No, Hope Is Not Yet On The Lord's Chart
Thousand Words Paint A Picture;That Doesn't Create An Artist's Heart
A Hundred Million Metaphors, To Paint The Sisteen Chapel, For A Start
The Epitome Of The Underdogs, And Seemingly Barking Up The Wrong Tree"
Yet its true. The strong analogies and pertained rotation from your words
livingly attained in such manner where a true meaning of a certain piece
lies. It was like rephrasing the sayings where circular motion youve bent along.
"Instead Of Remaining True And Strong, You Abandon All Your Camaracs
And Take The Easy Way Out; Start Working The Cash At The Home Depot
Come Crawling Back To Blind Faith; Use Sunglasses To Deceive People
Your Skeleton Is Roughly Shod, You Don't Understand, Turn To God"
.....Home Depot was kinda clever. I see it this way. A maze. An unewnding maze,
where it seems there no beginning and no end. And youve just found yourself
trapped in the middle but yet the fact remains you dont know if you are or your not.
Still the questions in ur head asking you whats yet to do? Did i make the right
decisions or did i do something that would make me lose everything?. Blind Faith,
Shod Skeleton, Turn to God. I liked how uve turn it around.
And of course...Last Lines..
"Everything Is Gone, Here Child, Become My Lament
You Spent Many A Year Telling Me To Get Bent
Hope Is No More, That's Right, No More Bliss
Yes, Come Closer, See How Sharp The Knife Is"
IMagery with passion reflected on those lines. Its like Death is at hand but merely
staying away from it.Terminology mainly astounded me for a fact that they were
well used from the top to bottom.
Okay here's the hard part...the decision.
I know this would hard because both are such good writers and they pretty
much did a good job with these verses.And i am very impressed with the verses.
But we all know i had to choose.
These lines had me ...like whoa..
"
Who Really Believes That What Is Kindness Can Pass For What Is Weak?
Who Conceived The Very Reality, I Take For Access Granted Sneak Peek?"
So obviously...the fact that N demik Shined in his work....I am kinda hooked up
along those lines from none other than....
yeah...
Understatement
Just wanna say this is a very hard decision in such a close battle to begin with.
But judgement is stated.
Props to everyone going on Rnd 3.