Thread: One Mistake
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Old 09-29-03, 08:00 PM   #2
Blas-Fem-Ous
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Okay..It's like: I read your verses and stuff but the first 3 lines/bars or whatever (ie..line,tryin,flyin)rhymed but what happened to the last bar before you flipped the scheme? That kinda threw me off but "Oh Well"...Maybe u wanted to do it like that. Your lines are kinda "wordy"...
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