Amazing piece, i would love to disect it but i feel i would cause sensory overload lol, a few of those misspelings bertray your intelligence but the depth of this piece shallows the ocean. It was felt with an overall positive feel throughout the bad times and the struggles of life which was soothing, u could have gone off about the problems in depth but u kept it all relevant and pulled the reader in with its simplexity (complexity/simplicity) I really felt it, sickening drop, twas quite loose (get up on that new term) 1luv.