i thought that post was pretty good, the flow was on target through most of the post, i was feelin the wordplay and content, i liked how u drew out the topic at hand(u know what i mean?), but anyway, the content was tight, overall that was pretty damn good for a topical verse, so good job, keep it up.
yo if u have the time can u hit this up?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82558
thanx
peace.....