yea i agree wit everyone else, it was pretty basic for a diss. i wasnt really feelin the punches, the vocab was a ok, the wordplay was good, but youll get better wit experience so keep at it, keep postin homie.

yo if u have the time can u hit this up?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82558
thanx

peace.....