i liked it.....the fact that the style was so simple........no one uses 4 and 5 syllable words when they are pissed......i also liked the structure made the entire thing build up.....and then it faded away just like anger.........i would have liked more in the body of the piece but we can't always get what we want........this is almost like st. anger by metallica you should check it out.....good drop......poetically speaking you have elevated quite a bit.....

respect...