aight holmes, first, no one is ever gonna feed off of that verse, thats not an insult, but i think people would rather think of there own shit, instead of steel an idea off a newb, but anywho back to the post, it was actually pretty good i thought, the flow fell off a little but it made for a pretty good read, the wordplay was good, i thought the vocab was ok, i just think that u could use some more multis in ur verse, i dunno if its just me, but whatever, that was pretty good, keep droppin homie.

yo if u have the time can u peep my new post?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82558
thanx

peace.....