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Old 09-29-03, 11:41 PM   #2
Speek.E.Z.
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kay this was... uhhh... not good.. what the fuck is a weehacle? its rhyme was a bit off.. i think you need to elevate big time before you drop again and about dropping again do you really think you should.. this rap needs better structure.. more vocab, and more of a rhyme scheme.. oh ya dont make up words
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