bah?!?!?!?! WTF??!?!?! was that
u need to put your sentecnes
into line form, not just write
paragraphs, you had good flow
some wordplay, but next time
spit on a topic, not jut random
gangsta shit, and no do not base
the topic around you, i mean this
really had no reasong or meaning
behind it, it was just simple randomness
that you typed ou in probably
10 - 20 mins, please next time
a topic is really nesseccery for
OM's bah just eilivate, u got flow
all u need is direction and guidance
to the right way..............................



return the favor with some funky flavor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82195