bah?!?!?? this wasnt all that great
i mean a story piece, which went
back and forth, u need more practice
and the flow was off 90% of the time
your lines were too long and really
fucked up the flow............................
decent topic terrible content...............
work on yourself.this was 4.9/10
return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82195