^^^shut the fuck up u fat paki, at least he doesnt bite his damn verses so u have no room to be critizing other peoples work, but anywho, ur flow fell off a little durin the post, and to change that i suggest u shorten up ur lines a little, the wordplay and vocab were ok, try and include some multis in ur verse next time though, that was pretty good for a newb, keep postin homie, u have potential

yo can u please return the favor wit my post
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82558
thanx

peace.....