idk, it werent that bad.....you had a few good lines but you werent consistant with it. ^^^ like cat above me said, try to find a topic you can write somethin about....not everything has to be about guns or thug shit......find somethin you can actually relate to and go from their.. keep elivate'n, 1

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" So for the 2nd time [The Pharisses] summoned the man who had been blind and said
"Speak the truth before God. We know this man is a sinner."
"Wether he is a sinner I do not know."
:The man replied:
"All I know is this...Once I was blind and now I can see"
John 1x 24-26