I thought Ill's verse was pretty good. I think some of its appeal was in this perceived "simplicity." The flow really kept up nicely. But, some of the rhymes were predictable. And the finality was kind of unrealized to me. But, good work.

Chrit's verse, on the otherhand had a rather good sense of finality (considering the Death and all!). There was a positive social commentary that superceded the personal meanderings of Ill's verse. The flow was not as on-point, but it did shake it up a bit... with the hesitation/trailing off mid-bar.

Now, I guess I am the wrong one to bitch about this, because sometimes I feel I do it to. But the actual topic did not leap out to me in either verse. It was kind of a tack-on item that was certainly not imperitive. But that doesn't stop verses from being nicely written.

Vote - Chrit