You dropped a pretty decent rhyme right here. your word play was straiight, content was good but try and shorten up your rhymes into shorter bars. The worst thing is reading something that seems to go ON and ON and ON. All in all good drop,keep elivate'n and doin your thing, 1

__________________
*R.I.P*
Jimmy L. , Louis L. , Aj R. , Tyler R. , Chris R., Dan W. , Matt F.......
" You all will never be forgotten and your spirits live within us all!!! R.I.P*"


" So for the 2nd time [The Pharisses] summoned the man who had been blind and said
"Speak the truth before God. We know this man is a sinner."
"Wether he is a sinner I do not know."
:The man replied:
"All I know is this...Once I was blind and now I can see"
John 1x 24-26