sad....if you wrote a piece with smaller words they'd cry up your vocab......you write something with words over 3 syllables and it's to wordy......blah ignore'em........this was not lacking in multi's he just didn't point them out the way others do.....

Disrupted corrupted ethics with dislectic unexpected prefix,
A fix.. thats endless so they lay pretending pre mending

^dope way to start out a piece caught my eye right away you don't use the same structure of others on this site so it took me a second to find the flow. which by the way was on point.


Attacking with the privlaged scrimmage of a urban pilgrimmage
this is a grim age with a film stage, that consists of *lights*
*camera* then followed by a mass media massacre hey isnt
^hear this was just verbally sicc, gotta respect the wording of this made me go goooddayyyuuum

So when then the trigger's pulled with a fist full the wishful vibration
domio effect would counter react on your fist fool [why is that]
So the bullet exits gets deflected and when it's reflected from the
next kid the barrel flips to grip you and and pierces your skin fragments unexpected
^great way to end it. overall i don't think this needed its basically dope the way it is. keep blessing us