aiight the best line s in this were

VA SLIM:striv'n to be famous~want'n to be like mike meyers
but in all reality your just an Austin with no powers
~this was a nice line in my opinion~

OLI dog:but dis is da lst of da battle between me and *u*,
so ill finnish of with i no my verse was shit but not as shit as *u*,
~still a weak line~


use more vocab, an structure, i kno u both newb but ya gotta read other battles an elevate ur styles


my vote:slim


hit this up:but dis is da lst of da battle between me and *u*,
so ill finnish of with i no my verse was shit but not as shit as *u*,

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