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Old 09-30-03, 08:18 PM   #2
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Dope peice man, Cam you really captured the emotion of feelings for w/e girl you are talking about, I was hanging off of every word you said like it was me in that situation, good usage of words, structure was on point like always, but the begining.. I liked it =) Worked as an opener, but wouldnt as a whole verse..

Bazzy, not bad, decent flow, imagery, and structure, keep it up girl..

Ive seen the Long Faces on jealous men as we've walked past
But love was just another Four letter word that i couldnt grasp


^ Geez.
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