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Alright This how I am going to break it down...
-=orbiit=-
No use to protect your reputation; because it was never there;
only time X battles a vet; is when the warlords truth or DARE.
- I actually like this bar it was creative and a direct hit and a great ways to start the battle 8/10
Your nothing but fair; wont touch another win; not till after this;
if X marks the spot; then my verse just made a full contact hit.
It was an ok bar but when you start if X marks the spot it kinda lost its flo 5/10
People used to think highley of you; till they new your wins were fake;
& you really need to remove the list; so theres room for me in your loss space.
This bar had good intention but fake and space dont rhyme.. 2/10
Here's a comment; your verse was smashing; like it got in an accident;
were you dropped on your head as an infant?! because it made whack indents.
aight flo needs more material it seems your are trying to fit to many multi's you should just be direct straight to the point although multi's are good 5/10
Letting your self go poor; so wellfare will hand out some wins for the needy;
i'll leave your whole crew bleeding; havent you got enough wins; with me your gettin greedy.
Killer finisher this made me go wow this might be close after all...9/10
Total = 29/50
X Ecution
Unfortunately my comp screws up so I will comment on the the bars but not post them aight...
1st bar Crazy Multi's and good flo, the only thing there wasn't really a direct hit or punch so that will cost you 6/10
2nd bar Great way of working with multi's and great flo and this is what I was talking about punches which you did so 8/10
3rd bar Face and say dont rhyme even if you rapped like Bizzy Bone 2/10
4th bar Good punch need to elivate on vocab... 7/10
5th barI liked how it flowed although unfortunately I am not smart enough to understand what it meant but it was good 7/10
Total = 30/50
Overall Vote - X ecution
But I will not poll vote cause orbiit will say its a D/R vote but tight battle though
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