even though ur style was simple it was apt for the chosen topic
some of the most complex verses are simply written..
this was a great example of that...u conveyed ur emotions really well and used some really nice metaphors and similes

the first style set it all up really well...set the tone
and then the second went more in depth and was pretty dope

'But love was just another Four letter word that i couldnt grasp
Maybe i Shouldnt Have been so reluctant to let u notice things,
And shared with you my every thought, my hopes and dreams
But u mean so much to me, & every moment of thought spent
is dedicated to you mentally, cuz i cant get you out of my head
& yet Perfect Harmony's Found beneath that Mahogony Brown
w/ that smile that could rid any problem thats Gotten Me Down.
^before that i wasnt feeling the lines too much but these more than made up for it
props