errrrr...*stutters*
sorry to say it but this really sucked
the constant rhyming of words just to rhyme didnt really grab me
very simplistic
really basic rhyming and not good...
need to get a better vocab...change up how u rhyme...just rhyming 6 words ending with a life type sound doesnt make it a good read or even rap..
just the way i saw it...keep dropping and u'll imprvoe