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Cool Respect to both battlers
This is how I bbbbreeeak it down
Orbiit
1bar - North was right bars and star dont rhyme 5/10
2bar - I like how you used his battle score in your verse what I didn't like was that you used wrong twice in the same bar... 6/10
3bar - Good line of the beggining of the bar but I check the link and I still don't get it so I give ya 6/10
4bar - This bar had so much potential but youjust didn't make sense maybe if you rearranged the words it could have been a kill 5/10
5bar - Crazy bar had to give you 8/10
6bar - what a FINISHER 9/10
Overall = 39/60 = 65%
Great Battle orbiit only tip try to make sense, rearrange wording and structure your verses.
Northern Touch
1bar - You came out really hard striking the head by directing the punch to both orbiit and Bizzurk bold move 8/10
2bar - I like how you continues with how bizurk dick was in his mouth and how cummin quick and leaks all made sense and then showing orbiit as like if he was scared cause he didn't answer your bitch slap calls or even inside his crew callout ... 8/10
3bar - I liked how first you take the head out Bizzurk and then go for the neck artick 7/10
4bar - You must be in a kamikaze mission going for their whole crew so I am going to have to say good luck with that 6/10
5bar - WOW this put a smile on my face... cause your last line was so original and creative, cause ussually you wanna dismiss your opponent instead you gave him a blessing 10/10
overall = 39/50 = 78%
Tips you should elevate your shit and I think you should join a better crew...
Overall Vote going to Northern Touch. Good Job though Orbiit and if you say that north should have been out of 60 it would have been a tie then I would still vote for north cause he scored exactly like you with less material... Remember its quality not quantity...
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